hey guys help a buddy out.

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  1. rayaccord101

    rayaccord101 New Member Registered VIP

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    So my buddy is trying to become a rapper. And needs a little help with putting his music out there. well heres one of his tracks. All comments welcome as negative ones will only make him improve.http://soundcloud.com/status-4/the-real-her-remix
     
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    Raabe Hell yea I suck toes! Registered VIP Registered OG 5+ Year Member 10+ Year Member

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    I hate rappers.

    Hope that helps.
     
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    Very original... I've never heard an ignorant, misogynistic, sociopathic highschool drop out rhyme over a beat that sounds like it was made by his 5 year old nephew. Regurgitating the same s*** you hear in every other rap album doesn't take tallent... he should give up now.
     
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    I was hoping you would chime in on this.

    That was probably one of the worst mixes I've ever heard. Sorry mang..
     
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    Why are you saying 'Sorry'? OP should be apologizing for asking us to listen to it.
     
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    BC I basically made this kid cry in another thread, then Joe banned me for it. I'm 'being nice'.
     
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    I thought it sounded like every other rap
    Like poop
    Plus all rap stands for is retards attempting poetry
     
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    'Being nice' isn't your style, and it's creeping me out.
     
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    :lol: !!!!!
    GOOD!!!

    Wait, why are you still up? It's herra late over there...
     
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    Raabe Hell yea I suck toes! Registered VIP Registered OG 5+ Year Member 10+ Year Member

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    New hours, about to head home for a bit soon. Trying to get my body used to 'normal people time' so i dont fall asleep driving at 1pm.
     
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    It actually wasn't bad, the beat and subject matter are pretty generic but the rhymes aren't bad. I've certainly heard a lot worse. The thing about music is 99% of people are unsuccessful when it comes to actually making something of it. My advice would be to just keep working on it, focus on content and improving clarity (not that it was bad, just could always be better).
     
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    yea he's just starting out, so he's not good right now but yea like you said if he just works more on it maybe he can make something out of it. (maybe not) who knows.
     
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    I actually like some rap, but i didnt honestly think that was very good, but if its his dream tell him to keep working on it
     


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